Murderpalooza(Take 2)

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Three openings
1.Deadpool
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Slight mod of story so anyone can join.



looking for anyone interested in a storyline. For the characters, basically, they are in for an interview of some kind. Also, others could be captured and thrown into the madhouse. Then they find themselves caught in the madhouse built by Arcade and Modified by Bastion. There will be a few more that might show up. Only one will survive(Not really) as they are put through trials and obstacles.

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I am still interested in this, but is there a lead-in to this? Should Arcade's presence be made apparent before the "victims" appear (ie: should Martyr be posting before anyone else right now?)?

Also, a bit more "scene building" or "stage setting" in the initial post might be a good idea to set up the cast you end up receiving. Bastion being evil is a good opening in terms of how a comic book would be written, but in terms of running an RP thread, it's not really giving any descriptive information of where you want players to be at the start to get things moving. Where is the interview supposed to take place? Does it seem shady, legit, in an office, a warehouse? This way, players start/end up where you need them to be and can go off from there with their own adventure in Murderworld.

Even if you don't put this info in the post itself, a quick PM to the players involved so they can better describe what their character sees would also help. You've read my work before - I'm very sensory when it comes to be writing, describing much of not only what's seen, but sounds and smells and temperature as well, since it not only pads the post out and gives it more substance, but it makes the whole scene become more alive and "real".